Haikus

[namida]

Haha. I wrote a Haiku poem about how I feel right now. And it's serious, so don't go making joke about it.

As things all get worse,
I realise it's all hopeless,
I'd be better dead.

Yet I stay here still,
I don't know why I bother,
I should just give up.

What is keeping me?
Forcing me to just live on?
Why can't I just die?

Every second comes,
Bringing me closer to death,
I CAN'T VILGEHK WAIT!

Kill me, destroy me,
You hate me, everyone does.
Please bring me the end.

You know you want to,
End my life, end it right now,
Come on, please do now.

So as I write this,
I'm just trying to waste time,
While I wait to die.

(censored it a slightly better way)

[tumble_weed]

great...

actually the second stanza isn't all that bad, the rest i think you mention death, kill die too much

[Lemeri]

Great. Now I'm in a bad mood. Why don't you just commit suicide if you really feel that way?

[Ice_Eagle91]

Steaver!!!! That haiku is not good! Don't you go to h*ll if you commit suicide?

And you know what? You did not censor one of the bad words!

Just like Lemeri, I'm in a bad mood too! If you commit suicide, you won't be able to talk to us in the forums, especially me!

[namida]

I wouldn't do that
I would never kill myself
I wanna die though



So anyway guys
From now on lets make this thread
Only in Haiku

(in other words - from now on, lets have a whole thread in Haiku only! ^_^)

[Andi]

Well, I censored the 1 bad word I found.

And because of the bad mood... I have no idea what's the problem. When I read this I have to laugh what results in feeling happy!

[namida]

Haha. Vilg that. I feel happier now, thanks to a certain person(strangely, their last name is the same as my first name with an extra letter on the end)

[Conway]

Steaver, may I recommend you join the forums at http://www.antiaverage.com/index(original).shtml? It's full of people like you. (No offence or anything!)

 &#A0;Still, the poem's not bad. Well done! Don't go killing yourself, though! You won't go to hell for it, but it's still not a good idea.

[namida]

I wouldn't do that
I would never kill myself
I just want to die

Well that isn't true
I no longer feel that way
(If you give a vilg)

[namida]

Well... can't always be negative! Now that I'm out of the negative mood, I should post a positive Haiku! It's not to a specific person though, it's just that I though "Oh what the damn heck... Why don't I just get ideas.... For a love Haiku".

**Only Forever**

Don't just leave me here
I can't survive without you
I need you with me

Even though I try
I simply depend on you
You're more than my life

I love you so much
You just don't know what you are
What you are to me

Only forever
That is how long I'll love you
'Till the end of time

[Andi]

You should become a rapper. These might be good for raps. But I don't like Rap... X_X

[Lemeri]

I hate rap, but millions of people like it, so you could make money.

[namida]

Rapper? Kwih, booooriiiiiiiing... I've tried before. I can send you some of my songs on MSN, if you want.

[Lemeri]

No thanks.

[dark_phoenix]

The problem with these
Is that you just get started
And then suddenly