Lemming Poetry XD

Started by tumble_weed, July 09, 2004, 03:51:11 PM

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chaos_defrost

Mayhem 24...
Just bash left, then right, then left.
What were they thinking?

"They", of course, referring to the game developers who placed that level so late in the game.

And this one only took me 22 seconds. I can write a haiku on almost anything in under a minute.
"こんなげーむにまじになっちゃってどうするの"

~"Beat" Takeshi Kitano

tumble_weed

Insane Steve's haikus:
It only takes one minuite
to write one of those

namida

Mayhem 29...
What were they thinking with this?
It's true insanity.
My projects
2D Lemmings: NeoLemmix (engine) | Lemmings Plus Series (level packs) | Doomsday Lemmings (level pack)
3D Lemmings: Loap (engine) | L3DEdit (level / graphics editor) | L3DUtils (replay / etc utility) | Lemmings Plus 3D (level pack)
Non-Lemmings: Commander Keen: Galaxy Reimagined (a Commander Keen fangame)

chaos_defrost

Steaver's haiku's flawed:
the last line isn't correct
with six syllables.

This one took me about 45 seconds.
"こんなげーむにまじになっちゃってどうするの"

~"Beat" Takeshi Kitano

DragonsLover

It doesn't matter
If there are some small mistakes
In these haikus

Ten seconds!
I like dragons! They're the center of my life! I'll never forget them...

Ice_Eagle91

Taxing 15...
The level design is great...
It is very AWESOME.

Took 15 seconds.

Lemeri

I think your haiku is flawed too.

chaos_defrost

One more syllable
is needed in the first line;
one less in the last.

22 seconds.

HAIKU FORM:

[5 syllables]
[7 syllables]
[5 syllables]
"こんなげーむにまじになっちゃってどうするの"

~"Beat" Takeshi Kitano

namida

Taxing 11
Could have given more time there
There is just enough

About 30 seconds. ^_^
My projects
2D Lemmings: NeoLemmix (engine) | Lemmings Plus Series (level packs) | Doomsday Lemmings (level pack)
3D Lemmings: Loap (engine) | L3DEdit (level / graphics editor) | L3DUtils (replay / etc utility) | Lemmings Plus 3D (level pack)
Non-Lemmings: Commander Keen: Galaxy Reimagined (a Commander Keen fangame)

DragonsLover

I like all lemmings
They are cute, they are funny
I really like them
;P
I like dragons! They're the center of my life! I'll never forget them...

Liebatron

 :D  that'sgood  ,I like it. there's one big roadblock stopping me from writing a haiku. i have no idea what the requirements for a poem to be a haiku are.

Ice_Eagle91

A haiku contains three lines.

The first has five syllables, the second has seven, and the third had five.

Thanks to G3K!  :)

Liebatron

ok thanks.

this is not that hard
haikus are really easy
they are fun to do

25 seconds

DragonsLover

A mistake: Second line have 8 syllables... X_X
I like dragons! They're the center of my life! I'll never forget them...