Lemming Poetry XD

[tumble_weed]

Yup...I decided to make a lemming poem  B)|8):


Moving out the trapdoor,
A sea of long green hair,
They come out more and more,
Blue costumes everywhere

Moving without a sound,
Across the grainy sand,
As their feet touch the ground,
They dig down through the land

Falling from the great height,,
Each goes their sperate way,
Some go left, some go right,
Every click they must obey

Now the end's just ahead,
Some turn and hit a wall,
And are just left for dead,
Next time I'll save them all

[Lemika]

It's pretty good. I like the first part best

[Andi]

Very good! B)

[Liebatron]

i like it!! B) B) B) B) B) B) B) B)

lemme try.

naval lemmings

a shipfull of lemmings?
this could be bad.
"away from the water,into the harbor"
they all say...
a ship going out of harbor,
and another going in..

KLUNK!!!!
what was that?!
i don't know but i think we should panic!
two ships colliding...
whaddaya expect, they're only lemmings.
"we can't help it if were stupid, were lemmings!!
shouted one.
the ships sunk into the harbor.

wump!!
"huh? we stopped sinking?"
"we've landed on the ruins of another ship?"
"that sunk in the harbor a long time ago?"
YEA!!!!!
...................
........now what?

AHHHH!
we're stuck in the harbor!!
"wait i've got an idea!!"
"really you do?"
"if we throw enough lemmings in the water,
it'll make a brigde of lemmings!!"
sploosh!sploosh!splash!
"WAIT!!i've got an easier idea!!"
"we can all use our builder skill!!"
so they all built a bridge.
and got onto shore.
except for the three,
that were chucked in the water.



.......so whaddaya think?

[namida]

No offense dumb_lem, but if that even is a poem, it certianly doesn't sound like one.

[G3K]

A haiku, why not.

Dig down, dig quickly
Oh crap it's Armageddon
4, 3, 2, 1, 'splode

And yes, I know the countdown starts from five, but it wouldn't be a haiku then, would it?

[Mr. K]

I like these poems, except dumb lem's. That wasn't even a poem. Good work! If I were better at writing poems, I would do one too.

[tumble_weed]

oh and dumb_lem's poem is a poem...it's just freeform

[Andi]

Yeah. Dumb_lems poem is one. When I have a free brain I could do the stuff on the poem I did in this year in school with poems. Only this time in english. It'll be a nice practice.

[DragonsLover]

Lemmings are my little friends
I want them up in my hands
They bash threw each dirty wall
And I hope that they'll not fall

Luckely, they are all floaters
They land correctly on the gra.ss
Then I turn them all miners
And I want to kick their....... huh, forget this!

Finally they find the exit
I heared a lot of word "Yippie!"
It's over so I'm happy
And I still want to play a little bit

That's cool! &#A0;B)

EDIT: I dislike that the forum do not accept the words with "a.ss" inside. Like gra.ss, pa.ss...

[Andi]

Another reason why we should delete the censor list... Anway, very cool!  B)

[chaos_defrost]

Look at the lemming.
Climbing, Floating, and bashing.
Oops. Exploded it.

~Haiku written by Insane Steve in about 35 seconds

[Liebatron]

  :Di like it!!that's funny!

(mine wasn't meant to rhyme)

[tumble_weed]

Solution Poetry!!

Level One-Just Dig
10 Lemmings land on the ground
Dig down through the dirt

[DragonsLover]

Here are 8 haikus on tools:

First tool is climbers
With this, Lemmings will go up
On any flat wall

Second is floaters
With this, Lemmings do not crash
They land perfectly

Third tool is bombers
Chosen lemming will pop up
And will make a hole

Fourth tool is blockers
A lemming will block others
And it will not move

Fifth tool is builders
A lot of steps makes a stair
And lemmings can pass

Sixth tool is bashers
Lemmings can pass threw a wall
In the small tunnel

Seventh is miners
With a pick a lemming dig
Diagonnally

Finally diggers
Lemmings can dig threw the ground
And make a big hole