Haikus

Started by namida, August 11, 2004, 10:08:22 AM

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Ice_Eagle91

Don't worry, Dumb Lem,
You can do it! Go, go, go!
I'm counting on you!

Ice_Eagle91

I'm not a loser.
Stop being so mean, Steaver!
I really mean it.

dark_phoenix

poor ice eagle!   :-(

Ice_Eagle91

Don't worry, buddy.
It's okay, no need to cry.
I'm okay, alright?

But not that okay.
Steaver teased me really bad!
Can't he stop it now?

dark_phoenix

first haiku, first line, has 6 syllables. just pointing it out.

second haiku is good :D

namida

I am not a dog.
Who called me a stupid cat?
Lemmings are insane.


(That has to be the most random Haiku ever)
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Ice_Eagle91

A haiku about dark_phoenix:

Dark_phoenix is great.
She's like a very good friend.
She's so nice after all.

Andi

But she said "Lemmings are STUPID". It was you who said stupid is a bad word.

Lemeri

By the way, is dumb a bad word?

Ice_Eagle91

Well, even if she says st*pid, I still think she's a nice person. Let's just not mind these bad words. Let the mods handle it.

Lemeri

No problem. It was your idea to make a big deal about them in the first place.

dark_phoenix

Quote from: Andi  link=1092218902/30#37 date=1093098846But she said "Lemmings are STUPID". It was you who said stupid is a bad word.


if u didnt know, i meant as in "dimwitted". not i hate them.

dark_phoenix

Quote from: Ice_Eagle91  link=1092218902/30#36 date=1093096377A haiku about dark_phoenix:

Dark_phoenix is great.
She's like a very good friend.
She's so nice after all.


thank you.   :D you seem quite nice yourself.

Ice_Eagle91

You're welcome.  :D Oh, and thank you, too!

Ice_Eagle91

Quote from: dark_phoenix  link=1092218902/30#34 date=1093058120first haiku, first line, has 6 syllables. just pointing it out.

second haiku is good :D

Those are stanzas, dark phoenix.

I fixed the first line on the first stanza.